Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Overall, I find the comments and feedback to be extremely helpful. The comments I like the most are the ones that give me specific suggestions on how best to improve my writing. Also I like the ones that specifically tell me what is wrong with my writing so I can be sure to fix it. I would say that most of my comments and feedback have been helpful, I try and give positive and constructive feedback that the writer can use to better their writing. With people's blogs it has been fun to get to know people in the class since this is an online class, I have loved learning about what their different interests are. I think my introduction post is a good representation of myself and lets people know about my interests and what I am in college pursuing. I think in the future I want people to be a little more specific when giving me comments and tell me exactly what they think would work better.

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